FLASH FICTION: ‘Loneliness’ – By: Tolulope Popoola

by RADICAL CHIC MAGAZINE on November 23, 2011

Old woman's hands tucked between her legs

Image by Horia Varlan via Flickr

I stared out of my bedroom window, facing the park. I watched a young woman and her toddler playing on the swings. The feeling of loneliness engulfed me again. These days, I’m lucky if I get one visitor a week. The only regular footsteps on my path are those of the postman. But even he doesn’t come in. He only brings me bills from the utility companies.

I long for the days when my life was full and purposeful. The days when I would complain about the noise, the mess, disappearance of money and everything else that came with a house full of teenagers. Now my house is empty. All my children are grown up, married with their own kids. They live too far away to –

My thoughts were interrupted by urgent knocks.

Curious, I shuffled in my slippers towards the front door and opened it.

My first son stood there, with his four young children running round his feet. I noticed the luggage too.

‘Megan left me for her fitness instructor. Can we stay with you?’

Tolulope Popoola is a writer, blogger  and lover of arts and literature. She recently quit her career in Accounting to become a full-time writer. She blogs at http://writingmystories.blogspot.com, and is the creator of the online fiction series, ‘In My Dreams It Was Simpler’. She also writes short stories, poems and magazine articles, and is currently working on a novel.

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{ 11 comments… read them below or add one }

emz November 23, 2011 at 11:21 pm

I guess when it rains it pours……HEAVILY!!!
Gurl, you’re good.

Tilewa November 24, 2011 at 11:59 am

Tolu dear,Your write ups get better and better…Am luv struck with your writings…Thumbs up,Girl!

JostWrite November 24, 2011 at 1:10 pm

It gets better every time. The reward of writing of talent, hard work and writing often. I like a lot.

buki November 24, 2011 at 9:34 pm

hope undeferred!

Dave Namusanya November 24, 2011 at 11:30 pm

Mmm, sad how? Likes it thoh

Chika November 25, 2011 at 4:24 am

Nice. I am a non-fiction writer, though am trying my hands on short stories. Write ups from you, lara daniels and jost write give me the strength to believe that i can do it. Tnx

LD November 25, 2011 at 4:34 am

Yeh! Moral of the story: Be careful of what you wish for.

Beeci November 25, 2011 at 10:41 am

Love it!!! Tolu you’re back!!!

Tolu Popoola November 26, 2011 at 2:51 am

Thanks everyone for your lovely comments! I truly appreciate them.

Omolara December 4, 2011 at 9:00 am

Nice story

Zita March 1, 2012 at 11:42 pm

You guys amaze me, gud one.

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